Piper’s Mom, Chapter 12

  • Posted on February 8, 2018 at 8:58 am

By Amanda Lynn

Neve was the first to wake the following morning. She heard the soft, rhythmic breathing beside her and the weight of an arm across her chest.

Turning her head, Neve smiled as she watched Stephanie sleep. She could lie here like this all day, but her bladder had other ideas. Neve sighed contently then stretched, being careful not to wake her sister. Last night had been truly incredible, hot and passionate, tender and loving. Neve was so glad they could share this intimacy with each other once again.

Stephanie had been right, though. If they were going to continue this relationship they would have to tell the girls. They were smart, and it wouldn’t take long before they caught on to their mothers’ affair. Then a naughty thought raced through her mind, a thought that sent little shivers of excitement through her. What if they could convince their daughters to join them in bed? Neve was pretty sure Brooke would be up for it, but would Stephanie or Piper?

Carefully removing Stephanie’s arm from around her body, Neve eased herself from the bed. Neve grabbed the short silk robe that hung on her door, put it on, and slipped quietly from the room. In a visit to the bathroom, she relieved herself and took a quick shower. Done, she made her way to the kitchen to start breakfast.

Deciding on french toast, Neve busied herself with the prep work. Lost in her task, Neve didn’t hear bare feet padding across the laminate floor behind her.

“Morning, Neve.”

Jumping, Neve spun around, holding up a whisk in a defensive posture. She relaxed immediately when she saw Amber taking a stool at the counter. The girl smiled and raised an eyebrow at the not so lethal weapon Neve pointed at her.

“Sorry, didn’t mean to scare you,” Amber chuckled. “I’m not sure a whisk would be much of a deterrent though.”

Laughing, Neve moved to the counter. “That’s okay, sweetheart.” She placed a hand on the teen’s. “And a good morning to you too,” Neve smiled, keeping her hand on Amber’s for a long moment, enjoying the sensation of her soft skin.

Amber was still wearing the same oversized tee she had worn the night before. Neve’s eyes wandered to the teen’s breasts where stiff nipples poked against the fabric. Neve’s heart raced and she had to fight to keep from taking them into her hands. She shook her head and looked back at Amber’s smiling face.

“I’m making french toast for breakfast,” Neve said.

“Sounds great. Can I help with anything?”

“Yes, thank you. Would you mind slicing up some strawberries and bananas?”

“Certainly,” Amber said and moved around to the other side of the counter. Getting the small basket of strawberries from the fridge and a couple of bananas from the counter, Amber stood beside Neve and began to slice up the fruit.

A ripple of excitement flashed up Neve’s spine. She stole a glance, looking down at the girl’s bare feet, up to her shapely legs, and to the tee shirt that fell to just below her ass. Neve thought back to the hypothetical question that Stephanie had posed. She had already flirted with Amber, even copped a feel. So, yes, she could fuck this girl if she were willing. That is what she had wanted after all. Wasn’t it?

Neve put a large frying pan on the stove and turned on the element. She purposely set it to low so it wouldn’t heat up too quickly. She, on the other hand, was already hot. With her back turned to Amber, Neve snuck a hand inside her robe and touched herself. Suspicion confirmed, she was very wet.

Licking her finger clean, Neve turned and approached Amber, stopping just beside the teenager. Neve’s heart raced, she was so close to this sexy young girl. She could smell her, the scent of the sex she’d had the night before still lingered on her. Neve wanted Amber, wanted to take her right now, right here in the kitchen. She felt her pussy contract at the naughty thought, and she had to squeeze her thighs together for a second.

“How’s it coming?” she asked, placing her hand on Amber’s lower back.

Amber stiffened for just a second then relaxed. “Good,” she said with a hint of nervousness. “Almost done.”

“Great,” Neve ran her fingertips up the girl’s back and played with the nape of her neck, then slowly trailed back down. “Did you girls have fun last night?” Neve asked softly. But before Amber could respond she added, “After you went to bed.”

Neve watched Amber’s face turn a dark pink.

“What do you mean?” Amber said shyly, averting her eyes.

Chuckling, Neve let her hand move down and rest on Amber’s butt. “We heard the three of you last night. Heard somebody yell as they orgasmed.” Neve waited for a beat or two.

Amber just looked at her and smiled meekly. “Oh, I see,” she said, sounding like someone had caught her doing something wrong.

“Relax, honey. None of you are in trouble or anything.” Neve slipped her hand lower, then up under Amber’s tee shirt. To Neve’s pleasant surprise, Amber was not wearing panties. Cooing softly, she gently rubbed the smooth globe of the girl’s ass. She heard the girl breath a hushed moan. Neve’s heart was pounding. The heat of the moment and the chance of someone catching them fueled her excitement as she continued her seduction. She just hoped that she wasn’t moving too quickly, but she felt confident Amber was at least a little interested.

Amber put down the knife she was holding and placed her hands on the counter. Not looking at Neve, she gave a soft sigh. Neve felt the girl’s hips push back slightly, and ever so subtly, spread her legs. Neve trailed a finger between Amber’s cheeks, brushing across her anus and touching the edge of her opening. Amber sucked in a sharp breath at the contact and Neve felt the teen’s juices pool. Damn, that didn’t take much, Neve thought, amused at Amber’s rapid response to her seduction.

“Is this okay? Me touching you like this?” Neve asked softly.

“Un-huh,” Amber whispered, almost too low to hear.

With her free hand, Neve grasped Amber’s chin and turned her face toward her. Amber looked at her with big, brown eyes. Neve brushed her thumb over Amber’s bottom lip. It was soft and full and beautiful. Neve wondered if she still tasted of Brooke or Piper.

“You are very sexy, Amber, and you have a beautiful mouth. May I kiss it?” she asked hotly, moving her mouth closer to Amber’s.

Amber nodded, not saying a word.

Neve smiled, watching her chest rise and fall with excitement. Squeezing Amber’s butt, Neve brought their mouths together, closing soft kisses on her lips. Amber turned and wrapped her arms around Neve.

Neve groaned into the girl’s mouth. She brought her other hand under the tee shirt and then pushed both hands up Amber’s back, caressing the smooth skin. Their kiss became heated, the kitchen filled with sounds of their heavy breathing and wet kisses. Their tongues swirled and explored hungrily. Neve’s creamy juices flowed and dripped, and she wished she had put on a pair of panties.

A hand found its way inside Neve’s robe, and she instinctively spread her legs as Amber cupped her aching cunt. Deftly, Amber began to toy with Neve’s clit.

Jesus! This feels so good, Neve thought as the pleasure raced through her. She groaned into Amber’s mouth just before she broke the kiss. She needed air. Neve was surprised at the boldness of the teen. She had caught Amber checking her out on a couple of occasions, and Amber did respond well to her flirting. But for this to happen so soon, if even at all, was a heavenly treat.

Panting, she tried to speak, “Fuck. Yes.”

Amber used two fingers, rubbing quick little circles over her clit. Neve’s knees threatened to buckle, and she leaned on the counter for support and Amber pushed her body against her, resting her pussy on Neve’s thigh. Neve stared at Amber as she fingered her engorged clit, sending more waves of desire through her.

“Fuck my pussy, Amber. Can you do that?” Neve said huskily.

“Okay,” she whispered.

Neve felt her robe come undone and Amber’s hot mouth touch her breast. Pleasure rippled through her, and she gasped as two fingers penetrated her. Neve tangled the fingers of one hand in Amber’s hair and held her head still as she sucked on a hard nipple.

As the thrusts from Amber’s fingers quickened and plunged deeper, Neve jerked back against the girl’s hand. The familiar pressure in her core was building rapidly, and she was finding it harder to breathe. Burying her face in Amber’s neck to muffle the sound, she cried out as her orgasm thundered through her. She held Amber tight as she shook and twitched with each aftershock that swept across her, threatening to turn her legs to mush. Once she was able, she let go of Amber and kissed her deeply for several moments.

“Damn, girl,” Neve said with a smile. “Thank you for that.”

Amber grinned and moved to a clear spot on the counter. Hoisting herself up, she pulled the tee shirt from under her ass and spread her legs. “You’re welcome.”

Neve’s eyes widened at the sight of the pretty pink pussy and at the girl’s boldness. Neve knew they should stop. Stephanie and the girls could wake at any moment. But that delicious-looking pussy was too hard to resist, and leaving the teen hanging wouldn’t be fair at all.

“What would you like, pretty girl?” Neve asked as she stroked Amber’s knees.

“Lick me,” she purred. A wicked grin played across her lips as she spoke.

Neve grabbed a stool and sat in front of Amber, pulling her to the edge of the counter.

Amber lifted her knees and rested her feet on Neve’s shoulders.

Neve leaned in and kissed the teen’s clit, savoring the aroma of her juices. Neve would rather have taken her time and enjoyed this beautiful young pussy, making Amber come many times. But it would have to be a quickie, wanting to finish before anyone else woke.

Amber gasped when Neve sucked the erect clit into her mouth and flicked it with her tongue.

The teen’s pussy was already slick from her arousal, and Neve pushed a finger through her folds and then into her entrance. Swirling and licking her practiced tongue over the girl’s sex, Neve savored the sweet taste of her honey and enjoyed the smooth, silky skin of her folds.

Amber groaned and put one hand on the back of Neve’s head. “Yes, fuck. Right there,” she whimpered.

Neve concentrated her efforts on the young clit, pushing her finger into Amber’s vagina as deep as she could.

Amber was bucking and twisting on the counter, rolling her hips against Neve’s talented mouth.

Neve pulled out, to just the tip of her finger, then pushed a second finger into the smooth wetness of her entrance. Amber moaned through gritted teeth as Neve pulled on her swollen clit with her lips. Soon, Amber tumbled over the peak, and convulsed as the orgasm took her.

Keeping her mouth and fingers on the girl, Neve waited until she relaxed. Slowly she withdrew and stood, offering Amber her juice-covered fingers. Smiling, and not breaking eye contact with Neve, Amber accepted and licked them clean. When she finished, Neve leaned in for a languid kiss.

“That was great,” Amber said.

“Glad you liked it, but I’m sorry I rushed it. I would rather have taken my time,” Neve said, helping the girl off the counter.

“It’s okay. It was still great. Maybe next time?” Amber asked with a giggle.

“Sounds good to me,” Neve smiled. “We better get cleaned up and finish breakfast.”

“Okay,” Amber said and headed down the hall.

Closing her robe Neve sighed, watching the girl disappear. That was unexpected, but totally fucking awesome. She chuckled as she washed her hands at the kitchen sink. Neve would worry about the sticky mess between her thighs once Amber returned.

She turned up the heat on the stove and gave the french toast mixture another stir just as Stephanie walked into the kitchen.

“Good morning,” Stephanie said, a mischievous grin on her face. “Something smells good. What’s for breakfast?”

“French toast,” Neve replied as Stephanie took her into her arms and traced her tongue across Neve’s lips, then kissed her.

“Funny,” Stephanie said. “From where I’m standing, it smells like sex and tastes an awful lot like Amber.”

Neve pulled back and looked at her sister. “You saw?” she asked, panic gripping her. Oh Shit! she thought. Did I just fuck everything up? She studied her sister’s face, looking for signs of anger or disgust. Instead, all she saw was a shit-eating grin plastered across Stephanie’s beautiful face.

“Uh-huh,” Stephanie said running a finger along Neve’s lip. “What I said last night, about banging Amber. That was hypothetical. I didn’t actually expect you to do it,” she said with a giggle.

“Um… well, it kind of just…”

Neve stopped mid-sentence. A thought came to her. Something that Stephanie had said. “You just kissed me and said it tasted like Amber. How would you know what she tastes like? Huh?”

She watched Stephanie’s face flush, and her grin seemed to get bigger if that was possible.

“I guess I have a confession to make,” Stephanie said, with another giggle.

“I’m sure you do. Let’s hear it,” Neve said, daring to hope she already knew what it was.

Stephanie leaned in, bringing her mouth to Neve’s ear. “I’ve been banging her too,” she whispered hotly, then nipped at her earlobe.

The panic and fear that had filled Neve, instantly vanished and an overwhelming sense of excitement replaced it. Neve damn near came at the thought of Stephanie and Amber fucking. She pulled back and looked at her sister, giving her a sly grin. “You, naughty girl. Just how long has this been going on?”

“Just a couple weeks,” Stephanie replied. “I asked that question last night to see how you would react. I wanted to tell you, but was afraid you would think I was a sick pervert and hate me forever.”

“Well, I guess you know the truth,” Neve said with a chuckle. “I’m as much of a sick pervert as you are.”

They laughed together, then Neve pulled her sister in for a deep kiss. The sounds of life emerging from the girls’ bedroom soon interrupted their romantic embrace.

“I guess we’ll have to continue this conversation later,” Neve said as they moved from each other’s arms.

“Agreed.” Stephanie gave Neve a playful slap on the butt. “Let’s get breakfast cooked, shall we?”

As Neve and Stephanie finished preparing the meal, Amber soon joined the two women and offered to set the table. Neve noticed the smirk that was on Amber’s face when she said good morning to Stephanie as if they were conveying information by thought alone.

Brooke and Piper made their appearance a short time later after having had a quick shower together.

“Good morning, you two. Sleep well?” Neve asked the younger girls.

“Morning. We slept very well.” Brooke said, giving her mother a big grin.

“You three must have been exhausted after all that sex last night,” Stephanie said nonchalantly as she and Neve carried the plates of french toast to the table.

Neve chuckled at the younger girls’ stunned silence. “It’s okay, girls. Steph and I are thrilled that the three of you can share such wonderful experiences with each other.”

Amber just grinned mischievously knowing that the adults were savvy to their nighttime debauchery.

“Yeah,” Stephanie chimed in. “Just don’t go around telling everyone. If it is just you three, that’s perfect.”

The girls looked at each other for a moment then back to Neve and Stephanie.

“Okay, um, we’ll keep it just between the three of us,” Brooke finally said. Piper and Amber nodded in agreement.

“Good. Now let’s eat,” Stephanie said, motioning toward the table.

 

*******

 

With breakfast done, the girls put on their bikinis and went outside for a swim and to lounge around on the dock. Both Stephanie and Neve stood at the large window and watched Amber and their daughters frolic in the water. They were so sexy, especially in their skimpy outfits. Both women smiled inwardly, noticing that the chill of the air on the girls’ wet breasts caused their young nipples to stiffen.

Sighing contently, Stephanie took her sister’s hand and led her over to the sofa. Sitting, she pulled Neve onto her lap and into a slow sensual kiss. She swiped her tongue through Neve’s mouth, caressing teeth, and gums before teasing her sister’s tongue. Stephanie could taste the lingering flavors of breakfast in her sister’s mouth. They played for a moment then Neve pulled away.

“Umm. That was nice,” Neve said. “But you should let me go brush first,” she smiled playfully at Stephanie.

Stephanie giggled and caressed Neve’s cheek. “I love you, sis. So very much,” Moving her hand down her neck and into her robe, Stephanie found a stiff nipple. With a goofy grin, she tweaked the erect peak, drawing a moan from Neve. Pushing the silk material aside, Stephanie took the nipple into her mouth, laving it with her tongue, swirling around the bud, and batting it eagerly.

“Oh, god, Steph,” Neve grunted. “I love you too.”

“Let’s go have a shower,” Stephanie said in a husky voice, gently pushing her sister from her lap. Stephanie stood, and both women headed for the bathroom. Dropping her robe, Stephanie bent to turn on the taps.

Not one to miss such an opportunity, Neve cupped her sister’s sex and pushed a finger into her wet vagina.

Stephanie didn’t move, enjoying the sensations of the single digit that twisted and pumped inside her. It felt heavenly, and she didn’t want it to stop. Reluctantly, she turned the small lever, and the water changed from the faucet to the shower head.

Stephanie stepped into the tub with mild disappointment as Neve’s finger slipped from her. Offering a hand to her sister, she helped her into the tub and into an embrace. They kissed deeply, the warm water cascading over their heads giving a new sensation to the taste and texture of their mouths.

They kissed for only a little longer, gurgling and sputtering as water flooded their eager mouths. Stephanie broke the kiss and guided her sister back a step out of the spray.

“If I’m going to drown, I can’t think of a better way of doing it, but I don’t really want to die today,” Stephanie chuckled.

“Me neither.”

Stephanie gave Neve another quick kiss before grabbing the washcloth and bottle of body wash. With deliberate movements, she moved the soapy cloth over Neve’s shoulders and arms, down her sides and across her belly.

Neve stood still, eyes closed and enjoying her sister’s touch.

Damn, she is so beautiful, Stephanie thought. Bringing her mouth to a nipple, she laved it with her tongue then moved to the other. Neve moaned softly. Stephanie kissed her lips and used the cloth to caress her sister’s breasts.

Holding Neve’s hips for support, Stephanie got to her knees and kissed the soft wet skin of her belly. She traced her tongue around Neve’s belly button and dipped inside. Neve’s hips jerked, and Stephanie looked up to see Neve watching her. Stephanie smiled and kissed her belly again, then pushed her nose through the tangle of wet curls on her mons.

Neve’s breathing became excited as Stephanie kissed her thighs. Lingering for a moment, only inches from her pussy, Stephanie sat back on her heels.

“No. Don’t stop,” Neve whined.

Stephanie smiled up at her sister and giggle. “You’re such a dirty girl. I need to clean you first,” Stephanie said in a throaty voice causing Neve to shiver.

Starting with her feet, Stephanie washed one leg then the other, avoiding direct contact with her sister’s pussy.

Neve whimpered every time Stephanie’s hand came close to her sex, and she rolled her hips trying to invite the touch she desperately needed.

Stephanie planted soft kisses on her thighs once more, teasing and tantalizing her sister so that Neve had to beg for release.

“Please, Steph. Lick me. Make me come.”

“Patience, baby. You’re still a dirty girl.” Stephanie said cupping her sister’s pussy with a cloth-covered hand. Neve groaned and jerked as Stephanie rubbed the cloth between her legs. Ringing out the washcloth, Stephanie wiped away the remaining traces of soap before putting the cloth aside. Pushing Neve’s legs a bit farther apart, she shuffled closer and look up, smiling at her sister.

“Open yourself for me.”

Neve complied, holding her lips apart, exposing herself completely to her sister.

Stephanie moaned with delight at the sight, a flood of juices gathered at her sister’s entrance. Gently she pushed a finger into Neve’s opening, then took her erect clit into her mouth.

“Fuck, yes,” Neve moaned, tangling fingers in Stephanie’s hair.

Stephanie pushed the flat of her tongue over the distended clit, flicking and swirling, eliciting sounds of pleasure from Neve. She pushed a second finger into her sister and ran blunt fingertips along the smooth wetness of her walls. Stephanie felt her sister push against her head, forcing her face into her cunt. Neve rocked in rhythm to the fingers fucking her pussy.

“Don’t stop, Steph. I’m so close,” she gasped between ragged breaths.

Pulling on Neve’s clit with her lips, Stephanie curled the fingers that were deep inside her sister, brushing against her g-spot.

Neve gave a strangled cry and grabbed hold of Stephanie, and she shuddered.

Stephanie used her free hand to help support her sister as Neve rode out the aftershocks that rippled through her.

Moments later, Stephanie stood and wrapped her arms around her sister. Pulling her bottom lip into her mouth, Stephanie sucked on it slowly. Releasing it, she kissed Neve tenderly.

“You can wash me anytime you want, Steph,” Neve said with a chuckle and kissed her sister’s neck.

“Plenty more where that came from,” Stephanie said. “Why don’t you get out and dry off. I’m going to wash before we completely run out of hot water.” She shivered slightly under the cooling water.

“But I didn’t get to make you come,” Neve said in protest.

Stephanie smiled and caressed her cheek. “You can make it up to me later. Now go, before I turn into a popsicle.”

Neve smirked as she stepped out of the tub. “I like licking popsicles,” she said, wagging her eyebrows.

“As much fun as that sounds, I would rather not get that cold,” Stephanie replied as she lathered herself with body wash.

“When do you think we should tell the girls about us?” Neve asked as she dried herself off.

Stephanie hadn’t really thought about it since they had first discussed it last evening. She knew they had to, but was still somewhat reluctant. What if Brooke and Piper reacted negatively to the idea? Though, if Piper were okay with her mother having sex with Amber, wouldn’t she be okay if she was having sex with her own sister?

Rinsed, she stepped from the tub and shut off the water. “I don’t know. Maybe tomorrow morning? Or, after we get back?” Stephanie said, taking the fresh towel Neve offered.

“How about tomorrow? After breakfast,” Neve suggested.

“Okay then. Tomorrow.” Stephanie wrapped the towel around herself and give Neve a soft kiss.

The women left the bathroom and went to their own rooms to dress. Stephanie slipped into a pair of shorts and a tee shirt. As she was putting her clothes away in the dresser drawers, she noticed Amber head into the bathroom. Stephanie sat on the edge of the bed, watching the bathroom door. Smiling, she wondered if Amber would be interested in some late-night fun.

“Amber. Come here a sec,” she said when the girl emerged.

She smiled when Amber jumped at the sound of her voice. “Come in and close the door, sweetie,” she said and patted the bed beside her.

“What’s up, Steph?” Amber asked as she sat down beside Stephanie.

Stephanie wrapped an arm around her and kissed her softly. “Are you enjoying the weekend so far?” she asked.

Nodding, the teen answered. “Yes, lots of fun so far.”

“I bet,” Stephanie said with a chuckle. “Seeing as I’m the only person you haven’t had sex with this weekend.”

Amber gave her a quizzical look, then one of surprise. Stephanie laughed and hugged the girl again.

“I saw you in the kitchen this morning. Having that sweet little pussy of yours licked by my naughty sister,” Stephanie said.

“You’re not mad, are you?”

“No baby, I’m not mad. We’ll just have to share you. Or have you at the same time. If you’re interested.”

Amber looked up at Stephanie, confusion written all over her face. “The same time? Are you two…”

Smiling wide, Stephanie nodded, “Yeah.”

“That’s awesome. Do Brooke and Piper know?”

“No, not yet. We figured we would tell them tomorrow. So, if you could keep that under your hat for now…”

Amber nodded. “So, about this ‘same time’ thing,” she asked, sounding excited.

Stephanie chuckled, eager little minx. “I was thinking, tonight, after Piper and Brooke are asleep, you could come join us in Neve’s room. But only if you want to.”

“Want to? I would love to!” Amber said, with an excited bounce. She then wrapped her arms around Stephanie’s neck and kissed her hard.

“Don’t say anything to Neve. Let’s keep it a surprise,” Stephanie said as she rubbed her hand along the girl’s thigh. “Now get back to Brooke and Piper, and try not to wear yourself out before tonight.”

Amber chuckled as she stood. “I’ll try not to, but those two do love to fuck. They must take after their mothers.”

Stephanie smiled at that truth and watched as Amber blew her a kiss and left the room, closing the door behind her.

Stephanie’s arousal from playing with her sister in the shower had not faded and this chat only served to exacerbate it. She slipped a hand into her shorts, not surprised to find the wetness there. Touching her engorged clit, she let a soft moan escape her lips. Circling a finger around the bud, she fell back on the bed and spread her legs. I should go find Neve and let her do this for me, she thought when she heard a knock at the door.

“Speak of the devil,” she said to herself.

Staying prone and leaving her hand in her pants. “Come in,” she called out.

The door opened, and she heard a small voice giggle. Stephanie twisted to look at the door and felt the heat rise in her face. Piper stood in the doorway, smiling, her eyes on the spot where Stephanie’s hand played inside her shorts.

“Mommy, you don’t have to be alone if you want to come. I’ll help you,” Piper said sweetly.

Stephanie’s heart swelled. She knew Piper meant what she said. The sweet ten-year-old just stood there in her pink bikini looking so damn sexy. At that moment Stephanie filled with both pride and lust. She hoped that Piper would be accepting of her renewed sexual relationship with her sister. As much as she loved her sister and hated the idea of ending this new relationship, Piper would always be first and foremost.

“Come in and lock the door, sweetheart. Mommy would love to have your help.”

Doing as she was asked, Piper moved to her mother’s embrace.

Stephanie kissed her daughter passionately while untying the strings of her little bikini.

Continue on to Chapter 13

9 Comments on Piper’s Mom, Chapter 12

  1. Jack says:

    Another erotic chapter! Thank you and keep them (& us) coming!

  2. wwilk says:

    This story is hot! Hot!! HOT!!!

  3. No One says:

    Well, that’s a nice breakfast for Neve. ;) And a fun shower. And an interesting night to come. And the afternoon is not looking too bad for Steph and Piper, either. Clearly, this family has a lot of fun. At this rate, I wonder if “telling the girls” will really wait until tomorrow.

    Also, sorry to be a pest, but… couple typos. ;)

    “She could smell her, the scent of the sex she’d the night before still lingered on her.” Missing a “had” in there, I would say.

    “Stephanie’s arousal from playing with her sister in the shower had not faded and this chat only served to exasperate it.” I think you mean exacerbate, rather than exasperate.

  4. Amanda Lynn says:

    Wow! You never fail to impress me, No One. Exacerbate is exactly what I meant but exasperate is kinda close sorta. :) Are you sure you don’t have a degree in English? I doubt many folks would know the difference between the two words.

    • No One says:

      Well, maybe kinda close, but you can’t exasperate something (except a robot, maybe?). A bad thing is exacerbated (made worse or aggravated), which would then exasperate (annoy or… again, aggravate?!) someone. ;)

    • PoppaBear says:

      I don’t have a degree in English, but I do have enough experience in editing to have noticed this misplaced word.

      I’m beginning to dread seeing your name, No One, in the comments section of a chapter I’ve worked on.

    • I’ll take responsibility for the first typo. In my final editing of the chapter, I inserted the contraction but for some reason removed the second ‘had’, which was there. It’s fixed now.

      And I’ll accept at least one-third responsibility for the exasperate/exacerbate issue. It’s weird, though. I could swear I’d noticed that and made the change during editing, but obviously I didn’t. Anyway, it’s also been corrected.

      Thanks as always, No One!

    • Amanda Lynn says:

      Fine! I’ll use little words from now on! :P

      So, other than that dear editors, how was the chapter?

  5. Tim says:

    That chapter was phenomenal Amanda.

    I knew (and hoped: that inevitably the two sisters would end up making love to each other, but the way it happened, especially the way they talked about their desires for Amber, was way, way beyond expectations.

    In fact, I’m running out of words, let alone superlatives, to describe this wonderful story.

    Just so pleased I found this site.

    All the contributors, and the editors

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